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Don't Look Back

Posted by cubic_me on May 24, 2004, at 8:51:35

Don't Look Back (written by me 1/11/03)

Tie me up upon my noose,
Let me hang, dangle loose.
Watch my eyes, a desparate stare,
Tie me up and leave me there.

See my struggle, a wasted fight,
Look on unstirred, ignore my plight.
Between life and death, am I afraid?
See my struggle begin to fade.

Walk away from my demise,
Weave a web of happy lies.
Feel the chill as day turns black,
Walk away and don't look back

 

Re: Don't Look Back

Posted by blever on May 30, 2004, at 15:41:39

In reply to Don't Look Back, posted by cubic_me on May 24, 2004, at 8:51:35

i like. dark. affecting. like the flow.


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