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my wish

Posted by Ivan MIchael on May 12, 2004, at 10:32:23

i wish that i could change it all
change all the times that man did fall
especiallie change what he did to you
give you a life that's happie and new
know this life does not include me
but you'd be normal as can be
there's not as much pain in the new life
you wouldn't need pills, a razor, or knife
but another reason i wish it this way
is i know that i'd be dead this day

dedicated to the girl i love, the onlie reason i have to hang on

 

correction

Posted by Ivan Michael on May 13, 2004, at 19:58:34

In reply to my wish, posted by Ivan MIchael on May 12, 2004, at 10:32:23

she is one of the main reasons that i live, but i cannot see her as the onlie reason that i live. sometimes love hurts. but this poem is still dedicated to her.


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