Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 337564

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To Slinky from KID A

Posted by KID A on April 18, 2004, at 22:02:45

(c) 2004. AMK McCarthy (no part of this text may be reprinted in any fashion whatsoever without the sole written consent of the author).

"I Was A duckling, and you did not mind. Bonzai"

for A.

pack your bags
little india
the kebash stands
the curry
(oh hurry! the train
it's
cha
in
G(up!)

Oh, If God's grA
(Ce)
is WiTH moi, I may
Oh I may
I may I may I may
be in this land
of Engerland's
Glory some
time SO
on.

-Apri 18, 2004.

Re: To Slinky from KID A

Posted by KID A on April 18, 2004, at 22:18:15

In reply to To Slinky from KID A, posted by KID A on April 18, 2004, at 22:02:45

ignore last post, this one is cleaned up five minutes later... better form.

To A. (A Letter)

for A, this is obvious, yes?

pack my bags
to a little india
the kebab stands
the curry
(oh hurry! the train
it's
cha
in
G(up!) iTs gATE!

Oh, If God's grA
(Ce) (Buddah, Sh i Va, Allah, Cao Dai - th
e
ye
is WiTH me, I may
Oh I may
I may I may I may
be in this land
of Engerland's
Glory some
time SO
on.

to sEe y
our
Pre (ious
smIl

e.

Apri 18, 2004.
_________________
There's nothing in the world for which a poet will give up writing, not even when he is a Jew and the language of his poems is German. - Paul Celan.

Re: From Slinky to ... » KID A

Posted by slinky on April 20, 2004, at 13:11:08

In reply to Re: To Slinky from KID A, posted by KID A on April 18, 2004, at 22:18:15

Dearest,
In tune..
Eat static ( gone a little rave-like need pulsating musical sculpture in my castle located in the rough side of town )
I feel safer walking in the dark with the other freaks that are lost or losing it.
OCD super washer - I got my tunes all soapyfied in my washroom heaven , the dirt of london under my fingernails.

I am A , although I'm still incognito
Invisible insignificant.

Ok less of the random tangent thinking...I think.
You twist my druggy brain into comfortable order
The edge is sharp , I grit my teeth
Gritty shaker
I'm going sane.

Molecules itch
Maybe I need an obsession...a delusional comfort zone
Shall we be victims , sad dreamers.

What happened? where'd ye go? (nm) » KID A

Posted by slinky on May 5, 2004, at 12:39:52

In reply to Re: To Slinky from KID A, posted by KID A on April 18, 2004, at 22:18:15

Re: From KID A to Slinky to ... KID A to Slinky » slinky

Posted by KID A on June 19, 2004, at 13:41:12

In reply to Re: From Slinky to ... » KID A, posted by slinky on April 20, 2004, at 13:11:08

oh darling, I was in the UK for about three weeks but working too much, I shall return in about 3 months or so, and we should meet... Oh, I fear my poem posted today will have me blocked, but I have you sleezemail... i miss you and you put my head in a comfortable muddle... you sort the pieces into their propper place...

oh darling, you are the baby in the barn.
god and I, love you.

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