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Death is certain

Posted by kellyr on April 12, 2004, at 10:49:31

Would you care to take a look or can you read me like a book.
But all the things I sometimes do it isn't me but someone else.
Somewhere I hear a voice that's calling out in the dark, just let yourself go, safe as any soul can be, that's all they said.
So understand;
When all I see can only bring me sadness.
I feel so tried,
I feel so drained,
and I'm wondering if I'll ever be the same again.
I have no more fear of dying.The sun don't shine in my world.
Sometime things aint what they seem, now could it be the Angel of Death has come for me.
I'm tring to find the world that I've seen in my dreams.
I'm trallin' on far and wide reaching the point of no return.
Flying so high on wings above I'm looking down on my body below. I see earth below, now I can see it all.
Is this Lumbo
Heaven
or
HELL;

 

Re: Death is certain » kellyr

Posted by noa on April 24, 2004, at 8:42:59

In reply to Death is certain, posted by kellyr on April 12, 2004, at 10:49:31

Kelly, this is so moving. It really helps to portray the pain.

Does it help you to write?


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