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pills and getting personal~~~

Posted by fayeroe on April 11, 2004, at 9:05:13












Vitamins

If there are others out there
who also take twenty-three
pills at a time four times
every day, please contact me
through the personals. We can
help each other force them down.
I will say they are tiny sandbags
keeping things on course. Youll reply
they are the flow itself, the tao.
We will look shyly at each other.
We will start to kiss. Together
we will feel them ooze and sidle
in teams through the digestive
tract like synchronized swimmers.
Who else will know your insides
like me? The warm flush of waves
when that orange horse pill hits
the blood like a boulder. The fizz
of cartilage holding itself together
for another six hours. Time release
capsules for dry bones, bleached
desert rats gulping down canteen
after canteen. What couple could
have more in common than a continual
dissolving? I am a young seventy-nine.
Looking for a minumum taker of sixty
pills daily. Call me if you want
to twist some tops off. Lets rattle
the bottles till theyre gone. Smokers okay.


James Doyle

A friend sent me this..I wanted to put it on "alternative" but thought it would be a re-direct....pat...p.s. Happy Easter~




















 

Re: pills and getting personal~~~

Posted by Jai Narayan on April 11, 2004, at 13:30:37

In reply to pills and getting personal~~~, posted by fayeroe on April 11, 2004, at 9:05:13



> Vitamins

> If there are others out there
> who also take twenty-three
> pills at a time four times
> every day, please contact me
> through the personals. We can
> help each other force them down.
> I will say they are tiny sandbags
> keeping things on course. Youll reply
> they are the flow itself, the tao.
> We will look shyly at each other.
> We will start to kiss. Together
> we will feel them ooze and sidle
> in teams through the digestive
> tract like synchronized swimmers.
> Who else will know your insides
> like me? The warm flush of waves
> when that orange horse pill hits
> the blood like a boulder. The fizz
> of cartilage holding itself together
> for another six hours. Time release
> capsules for dry bones, bleached
> desert rats gulping down canteen
> after canteen. What couple could
> have more in common than a continual
> dissolving? I am a young seventy-nine.
> Looking for a minumum taker of sixty
> pills daily. Call me if you want
> to twist some tops off. Lets rattle
> the bottles till theyre gone. Smokers okay.
>
>
> James Doyle
>
> A friend sent me this..I wanted to put it on "alternative" but thought it would be a re-direct....pat...p.s. Happy Easter~

I loved it! It's so much about what I do and am. I am almost as old as he is young.
This Easter is so happy....
I meditated with a group and then we discussed conflict, fear and death...my favorite topics....Ya!
So my day has been ever so special already and then this post....well I'm over the top with bliss.
thank you Pat.
Jai Narayan

 

Re: pills and getting personal~~~ » Jai Narayan

Posted by fayeroe on April 11, 2004, at 15:32:37

In reply to Re: pills and getting personal~~~, posted by Jai Narayan on April 11, 2004, at 13:30:37

jai, i giggled and giggled when i read it.....here i am in the kitchen, counting 'em out, chugging 'em down, getting better by the minutes, by gosh!!! xoxoxox glad it touched your being!

 

Re: pills and getting personal~~~

Posted by noa on April 24, 2004, at 8:45:46

In reply to Re: pills and getting personal~~~ » Jai Narayan, posted by fayeroe on April 11, 2004, at 15:32:37

Yes, this was good. Made me think of the hard-to-swallow ones and the fact that I am way beyond the pill container size pill container I need to carry around with me all day.


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