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Mockingbirds*********

Posted by fayeroe on March 10, 2004, at 6:34:51


MOCKINGBIRDS

by Mary Oliver

This morning
two mockingbirds
in the green field
were spinning and tossing


the white ribbons
of their songs
into the air.
I had nothing


better to do
than listen.
I mean this
seriously.


In Greece,
a long time ago,
an old couple
opened their door


to two strangers
who were,
it soon appeared,
not men at all,


but gods.
It is my favorite story--
how the old couple
had almost nothing to give


but their willingness
to be attentive--
but for this alone
the gods loved them


and blessed them--
when they rose
out of their mortal bodies,
like a million particles of water


from a fountain,
the light
swept into all the corners
of the cottage,


and the old couple,
shaken with understanding,
bowed down--
but still they asked for nothing


but the difficult life
which they had already.
And the gods smiled, as they vanished,
clapping their great wings.


Wherever it was
I was supposed to be
this morning--
whatever it was I said


I would be doing--
I was standing
at the edge of the field--
I was hurrying


through my own soul,
opening its dark doors--
I was leaning out;
I was listening.

I was watching the residence mockingbirds where I work yesterday and thought of sharing this poem with you.


 

I like it :) (nm)

Posted by socialdeviantjeff on March 12, 2004, at 2:10:53

In reply to Mockingbirds*********, posted by fayeroe on March 10, 2004, at 6:34:51

 

Re: I like it :) » socialdeviantjeff

Posted by fayeroe on March 12, 2004, at 6:18:03

In reply to I like it :) (nm), posted by socialdeviantjeff on March 12, 2004, at 2:10:53

I wish I could write poetry like Mary Oliver writes..........but I can't. I write books but poetry is what makes my little heart pitter=patter.....especially Mary Oliver. And Billy Collins does a number on me. And the man that I posted something by recently, Charles Harper Webb........just discovered him.

It also makes me smile when someone else connects with the poetry that I post..Pat


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