Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 322177

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Another work in progress, The Deviant

Posted by socialdeviantjeff on March 8, 2004, at 19:11:43

Haven't been here in a while, look like I have some cathing up to do. This is a work in progress. I call it "The Deviant".

All he has and nothing
Naught but solemness and cataplexy
This terrible burning hurting
Tearing, biting seething anxiety

A world of black, unattended
Behind the black curtain
To pull back and have rended
A view of nothing certain

Chiding voices in the dark
Do naught but bark and berate
A great bloody toothed shark
Teasing the ultimate fate

A hungry rabbit with fangs
Red eyes full of malice
In the balance the mind hangs
The blood of faith in the chalice

A childhood lost
The little boy cries for fate
In waiting for the walls to rot
The man loses his face

Others can’t quite discern
The freak, geek or madman
Watch his blood burn
They can’t feel as he can

The combatant eccentric
He answers to his judges
They perform their bailiwick
He replies in smears and smudges

Death show like a cool waterfall
Open arms, let it come!
To this dark world and within it, all
To show them what they have done

Where has he gone and why?
Cry the absent tenants
It was time to say goodbye
They look for more deviants

There is no saying sorry
The deviant says no more
To end the pain and worry
And shun the world that is a whore

Re: deep man (nm)

Posted by thinkfast on March 10, 2004, at 8:28:33

In reply to Another work in progress, The Deviant, posted by socialdeviantjeff on March 8, 2004, at 19:11:43

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