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Posted by kellyr on March 5, 2004, at 15:01:58
By day I live in a dream, By night I walk in the shadows.
Because when the fire starts, the pains too much for my mind.
I can't cure the hunger that burns in my heart.
I can't keep living, and I don't feel safe alone tonight, "cause I feel the presure boiling in my head. I'll keep on telling you that I can't stand the pain, but I don't think you understand".
I cry in the night, because there's something in the world I could never face. So I'll forget what I learned in the past, and listen now and be FREE.
forget me if you can I'm just a memory now, like all the ones before.
Posted by fayeroe on March 5, 2004, at 15:25:09
In reply to Inside My World, posted by kellyr on March 5, 2004, at 15:01:58
Posted by Jai Narayan on March 5, 2004, at 15:31:13
In reply to Inside My World, posted by kellyr on March 5, 2004, at 15:01:58
it's so powerful and with fresh descriptions.
I particularly love the first couple of lines. Is this your experience?
Posted by socialdeviantjeff on March 9, 2004, at 23:46:04
In reply to Inside My World, posted by kellyr on March 5, 2004, at 15:01:58
extraordinarily descriptive. I really like this.
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