Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 318058

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black hole 2

Posted by SummerSanders on February 26, 2004, at 20:06:11

should have been great
could have been

every oppportunity
smashed tp
pieces

spend every second thinking
what life could have been like
if only
my brain was different

would've had friends
would've had that great job

would've been happy?

I beg to know

 

black hole1 2

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 28, 2004, at 18:28:10

In reply to black hole 2, posted by SummerSanders on February 26, 2004, at 20:06:11

Thank you for this incredible poetry. You are to real and raw.
I am taken to a place with your words that I need to be. I need to see and know what you experience. thank you.


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