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peom...final cut

Posted by thinkfast on February 25, 2004, at 5:28:06

a wreck
on futile ground
taking stabs at
a fading life
to this sickeness
i am bound

tearing away
uncontrollably
the fear resides
in my living work
of non-fiction
resurrecting
a brutal
senseless addiction

forced distorted vision
breathing with conscience
the pain is more real
so i'm torn
denied to heal

marks of uncertainty
left to straggle behind
attempts at attention
the wounding kind

i'm so pathetic
sick of my sight
pity myself no more
and succomb tonight

Dear friend, it's good...it's good (nm)

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 25, 2004, at 21:47:20

In reply to peom...final cut, posted by thinkfast on February 25, 2004, at 5:28:06

Re: peom...final cut

Posted by SummerSanders on March 1, 2004, at 18:39:40

In reply to peom...final cut, posted by thinkfast on February 25, 2004, at 5:28:06

I truly admire your work. I think we must be in a similar space.

Re: peom...final cut » SummerSanders

Posted by thinkfast on March 23, 2004, at 10:26:13

In reply to Re: peom...final cut, posted by SummerSanders on March 1, 2004, at 18:39:40

i agree summer....i can deeply feel your work..amazing work!

Re: peom...final cut

Posted by Ivan Michael on April 30, 2004, at 17:44:44

In reply to peom...final cut, posted by thinkfast on February 25, 2004, at 5:28:06

i reallie don't know what to say. this poem is reallie good. the feeling is so real. i'm sure that you wrote this poem out of how you feel. that is the onlie way that i can write. well anieway. i thought it was amazing.

Re: peom...final cut

Posted by blog on August 13, 2004, at 3:07:47

In reply to Re: peom...final cut » SummerSanders, posted by thinkfast on March 23, 2004, at 10:26:13

Are you in any way related to Summer Sanders (http://summersanders.blogeasy.com), the olympic swimmer?

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