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another pill

Posted by mymind on February 25, 2004, at 13:29:32

In the darkness
of my mind
I close my eyes
try to rewind

What happened
where did I go wrong
I've been dead
for oh so long

The blood still rushes
through my veins
Acknowledge me
I'm not insane

You look my way
but do not see
Why must you
look through me

A beauty queen
no not me
An ugly beast
is what you see

Laugh at me
if you will
I'll just pop
another pill

(by me)

wow so incredible, thank you for this poem. (nm)

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 25, 2004, at 21:49:00

In reply to another pill, posted by mymind on February 25, 2004, at 13:29:32

Re: another pill

Posted by SummerSanders on February 26, 2004, at 19:06:41

In reply to another pill, posted by mymind on February 25, 2004, at 13:29:32

amazing!

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