Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 315032

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poem...untitled

Posted by thinkfast on February 18, 2004, at 5:34:43

here is another pissed off at the world poem i just wrote after a night of relentless confusion and anger from people and their insensitive cynical sarcasm along with the obsession with perfection....god, i need help...stronger drugs perhaps?

i'm so perfect
i want to fuck it all up
i want to go down
get fucked up on drugs
spread the disease around town
should i screw around at work
ignoring responsibility
start to sleep around
resort to violence and hate
confess all the anger i've found
say what i want to say
fuck off jerk
lie to them, as they lie to me
turning the tables around
i'm everything except what u want me to be
exploit your downfalls
make conversation of your insecurites
take a peek over your wall
but it's wrong
i'm so perfect
i've gotta fuck it all up to belong

Re: please be civil » thinkfast

Posted by Dr. Bob on February 18, 2004, at 23:50:39

In reply to poem...untitled, posted by thinkfast on February 18, 2004, at 5:34:43

> i want to f[*]ck it all up
> get f[*]cked up on drugs
> f[*]ck off jerk
> i've gotta f[*]ck it all up to belong

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