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poem.......driver

Posted by thinkfast on February 5, 2004, at 17:23:45

streets stir, fold and envelop
this sticky rubber making rounds
possessed statues, stirring hastily
driven by the lack of patients
accepting these transactions
it's not ascendancy
just a requisite of placidity

mindless wandering
behind a beat of tolerance
diluted blood screaming innocence
anxious, companionless
evading drives to shift again
but hidden mirrors endure oblivion

crystal coagulates, glistening black surfaces
emissions from accelerating continuously
exhausted concious regulation
sees a yellow sign of our side
warning the advance of passengers
the collision breathes the fuel again

 

Re: poem.......driver

Posted by SummerSanders on February 5, 2004, at 18:49:34

In reply to poem.......driver, posted by thinkfast on February 5, 2004, at 17:23:45

I liked yours too. You know what though? I took a Strattera today for ADD and it like totally blocked my creativity.

 

Re: poem.......driver

Posted by thinkfast on February 5, 2004, at 19:52:32

In reply to Re: poem.......driver, posted by SummerSanders on February 5, 2004, at 18:49:34

I've experienced the same thing with stims...

 

Re: F.Y.I

Posted by thinkfast on March 19, 2004, at 5:40:06

In reply to poem.......driver, posted by thinkfast on February 5, 2004, at 17:23:45

this poem is about meth...might help understand it a little


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