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Posted by thinkfast on January 16, 2004, at 6:15:49
I don't care to explain
The insignificance of minor issues
That led to papers in trashcans
Sticky fingers and bloody tissues
Reasons for impulsive decisions
Nights full of pauses and clicks
Scanning the rooms for dim visions
Drawings containing intangible feelings
Scribbled phrases on cigarette packs
And a library of books with no endings
Desk full of half empty and half full glasses
Tall black towering lamp of maddened music
Smoldering incense and blue tray full of ashes
Perfectly situated movies in a row
Cardboard, trash bags, and duct tape
Obscuring fractures of the broken window
Un-occupied blister packs of pills
An abandoned bicycle on the wall
Or two hours passing in the bathroom
Wrinkled by relentless waterfall
Posted by deirdrehbrt on January 16, 2004, at 12:16:49
In reply to poem...twitch, posted by thinkfast on January 16, 2004, at 6:15:49
All that I can say is... Wow! and... I think I remember a similar room place. I'm glad I'm not there right now.
Thank you.
Posted by Karen_kay on January 16, 2004, at 21:40:08
In reply to poem...twitch, posted by thinkfast on January 16, 2004, at 6:15:49
I'm just speechless. I've read it about 10 times and suspect I'll be returning quite a few more times. Brilliant! I really just can't tell you...
Posted by socialdeviantjeff on January 17, 2004, at 23:00:24
In reply to WOW!!!! » thinkfast, posted by Karen_kay on January 16, 2004, at 21:40:08
That hit a chord. I'm in that room right now. Great poem.
Posted by thinkfast on January 21, 2004, at 9:13:57
In reply to Geez...., posted by socialdeviantjeff on January 17, 2004, at 23:00:24
thanx all! it's just a list of symptoms....lol
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