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poem....soul skirmish

Posted by thinkfast on January 15, 2004, at 4:58:18

soul skirmish
+++++++++++++
a secret cure
inhabits the catacombs
of the unexplored soul
compliance denied
foreshadowing control

pulses within
construct comprehension
silencing solitary beliefs
tearing away
desolate suspension

commencement of assembly
still lacking
a logical design
unfortunate bystanders
of perspective defined

inhibit principles
wander slowly round
acknowledge the rare entity
for it is requesting response
imploring you to see

 

I really liked that (nm)

Posted by antigua on January 15, 2004, at 17:33:19

In reply to poem....soul skirmish, posted by thinkfast on January 15, 2004, at 4:58:18

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