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Posted by Phil on December 1, 2013, at 14:43:36
She really loved you
I didn't say a word
She couldn't break your darkness
She tried as she couldIs there anything I can do
We've been friends a long time
I know your yesterdays
I've seen your painNo, nothing
But you know I'm here, right?
Hmm? Oh yeah of course
Tomorrow night, it'll be funI loaded my car with what I could
Lost, I just went north
I checked into a motel with
a pen, pad and my.38.I never wanted to hurt anyone
But they hurt me
You can only bear the darkness
With eyes too tired to seeHis headstone had his name
'downfallen' and no more
His ashes thrown in the wind
In a boat in the gulf of mexicoI've never known anyone
And I never will again
To face so much so young
To not have love returned to him
Posted by ed_uk2010 on December 2, 2013, at 11:08:11
In reply to Very dark, posted by Phil on December 1, 2013, at 14:43:36
That's very profound Phil. I know little of poetry. Did you write it?
> She really loved you
> I didn't say a word
> She couldn't break your darkness
> She tried as she could
>
> Is there anything I can do
> We've been friends a long time
> I know your yesterdays
> I've seen your pain
>
> No, nothing
> But you know I'm here, right?
> Hmm? Oh yeah of course
> Tomorrow night, it'll be fun
>
> I loaded my car with what I could
> Lost, I just went north
> I checked into a motel with
> a pen, pad and my.38.
>
> I never wanted to hurt anyone
> But they hurt me
> You can only bear the darkness
> With eyes too tired to see
>
> His headstone had his name
> 'downfallen' and no more
> His ashes thrown in the wind
> In a boat in the gulf of mexico
>
> I've never known anyone
> And I never will again
> To face so much so young
> To not have love returned to him
>
Posted by Phil on December 2, 2013, at 13:06:24
In reply to Re: Very dark, posted by ed_uk2010 on December 2, 2013, at 11:08:11
Thanks. Yeah, have put my blog on hold and couldn't focus on this but I like to write. The best thing I've written is somewhere here. See if I can find it.
Posted by Phil on December 2, 2013, at 13:22:30
In reply to Re: Very dark, posted by ed_uk2010 on December 2, 2013, at 11:08:11
Funny how sometimes you write and it almost writes itself. I need to just keep writing.
To have your presence acknowledged
Whether it's good or bad or worse
Is something we all need I think
A reality check when we're on the blink
From the snake swimming in the sink
A man embedded in the wall
And we make one last call
The message goes out to all
But no one cares it seems
And all of our silly dreams
Are now apathy pain and loneliness
She's in her wedding dress
No one shows and no one cares
No one cares at all.
Posted by ed_uk2010 on December 2, 2013, at 13:28:05
In reply to here you go, posted by Phil on December 2, 2013, at 13:22:30
It's good Phil, very good. I think you're right that sometimes we need to be acknowledged, just to bring ourselves out of whatever is going on in our head. Sometimes, it's like escaping from a cell, a cell created in your own head. Just hope someone really just listen.
> Funny how sometimes you write and it almost writes itself. I need to just keep writing.
>
> To have your presence acknowledged
> Whether it's good or bad or worse
> Is something we all need I think
> A reality check when we're on the blink
> From the snake swimming in the sink
> A man embedded in the wall
> And we make one last call
> The message goes out to all
> But no one cares it seems
> And all of our silly dreams
> Are now apathy pain and loneliness
> She's in her wedding dress
> No one shows and no one cares
> No one cares at all.
>
>
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