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My latest song..called Critical Mass

Posted by Jay on June 12, 2006, at 15:11:12

It's a little "Country and Western" ditty..ahh..well no..heh.

Okay I haven't wrote the music yet...but some lyrics I've been working on.

Critical Mass
----------------

I set my liquid Navigator
To dive straight into the heart
A world of warmth and comfort
A perfect place to aim and depart

This is the place of the fire and molds of dreams
Ideas dancing on the edge of light
Surrounded by wires of gold and electricity
My adventure becomes a fight

Tonight I can't find the words
I only hear the sounds
Of the Sphere's music playing
Deep in the background

I turn away and just close my eyes - it just doesn't work
I turn away and just close my eyes - it just doesn't work
I turn away and just close my eyes - it just doesn't work

My head spins - I've found my treasure in this place
A blinding fountan of golden grace
A place to rest my anxious head
I'm just a pacsifist who fights with his heart instead
So please put down that hand
I beg you, put down that hand

I turn away and just close my eyes - ahhhh yes
I turn away and just close my eyes - ahhhh yes

Then she said "Let's take a journey through the heart.."
Exotic, spinning living machinary
"Why didn't I think of that..?"..an amazing place to start..
A world, a part of us we are taught to be afraid of

Tonight I can't find the words
I only hear the sounds
Of the Sphere's music playing
Deep in the background

 

Re: My latest song..called Critical Mass » Jay

Posted by Phil on June 12, 2006, at 16:05:32

In reply to My latest song..called Critical Mass, posted by Jay on June 12, 2006, at 15:11:12

Sounds like Rush to me, bro. : )
Good lyrics!

Phil

 

Re: My latest song..called Critical Mass » Phil

Posted by Jay on June 12, 2006, at 19:05:53

In reply to Re: My latest song..called Critical Mass » Jay, posted by Phil on June 12, 2006, at 16:05:32

> Sounds like Rush to me, bro. : )
> Good lyrics!
>
> Phil

Thanks very much Phil :-) Maybe I shouldn't ummm..try too hard to emulate Neil Peart, but that is really flattering of you to notice.
Maybe I should try writing a Frank Zappa type song..lol.

Thanks again bud..take care...:)
Jay


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