Psycho-Babble Social Thread 8698

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RHYMING GAME?

Posted by dreamer on August 4, 2001, at 22:06:19

Verbal tennis anyone?
add two or four lines that rhyme it could be a poetic epic.

Here I'll start with first four lines
This cyber song could last forever
Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
Absolute nonsense or poetically clever

 

Re: RHYMING GAME?

Posted by Willow on August 4, 2001, at 22:42:18

In reply to RHYMING GAME?, posted by dreamer on August 4, 2001, at 22:06:19


> Here I'll start with first four lines
> This cyber song could last forever
> Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
> Absolute nonsense or poetically clever

I take a break to walk the pup
thinking of my cyber friend
stopping to gaze at real life
but know I'll return in the end


 

Re: RHYMING GAME?

Posted by kazoo on August 5, 2001, at 0:06:50

In reply to Re: RHYMING GAME?, posted by Willow on August 4, 2001, at 22:42:18

>
> > Here I'll start with first four lines
> > This cyber song could last forever
> > Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
> > Absolute nonsense or poetically clever
>
> I take a break to walk the pup
> thinking of my cyber friend
> stopping to gaze at real life
> but know I'll return in the end

Forsooth! Hark, hark! I've lost a tooth
My head is empty and witless.
Next time I gape, I'll pop a grape
Peaches ... they ain't pitless.

 

Re: RHYMING GAME!!

Posted by lissa on August 5, 2001, at 6:52:29

In reply to Re: RHYMING GAME?, posted by kazoo on August 5, 2001, at 0:06:50

I fell in love with my neighbor, the chemist --
So kind, so fantastically clever.
When I saw the ring, I thought, What an ass
I've been, wearing those mini-skirts in leather.

 

Re: RHYMING GAME?

Posted by Cam W. on August 5, 2001, at 10:13:44

In reply to Re: RHYMING GAME?, posted by kazoo on August 5, 2001, at 0:06:50

Here I'll start with first four lines
This cyber song could last forever
Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
Absolute nonsense or poetically clever

I take a break to walk the pup
thinking of my cyber friend
stopping to gaze at real life
but know I'll return in the end

Forsooth! Hark, hark! I've lost a tooth
My head is empty and witless.
Next time I gape, I'll pop a grape
Peaches ... they ain't pitless.

I fell in love with my neighbor, the chemist --
So kind, so fantastically clever.
When I saw the ring, I thought, What an ass
I've been, wearing those mini-skirts in leather.

I've found words to live my life
from a very sage and noble prof,
Don't try to clean a loaded monkey,
Chances are, it just might go off.

 

Re: RHYMING GAME?

Posted by susan C on August 5, 2001, at 13:29:48

In reply to Re: RHYMING GAME?, posted by Cam W. on August 5, 2001, at 10:13:44

> Here I'll start with first four lines
> This cyber song could last forever
> Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
> Absolute nonsense or poetically clever
>
> I take a break to walk the pup
> thinking of my cyber friend
> stopping to gaze at real life
> but know I'll return in the end
>
> Forsooth! Hark, hark! I've lost a tooth
> My head is empty and witless.
> Next time I gape, I'll pop a grape
> Peaches ... they ain't pitless.
>
> I fell in love with my neighbor, the chemist --
> So kind, so fantastically clever.
> When I saw the ring, I thought, What an ass
> I've been, wearing those mini-skirts in leather.
>
> I've found words to live my life
> from a very sage and noble prof,
> Don't try to clean a loaded monkey,
> Chances are, it just might go off.

boy this is tough to write
the rythmns and not be trite
to express my dreams and desires
and kindle others fires

 

Re: RHYMING GAME?

Posted by dreamer on August 5, 2001, at 23:56:48

In reply to Re: RHYMING GAME?, posted by susan C on August 5, 2001, at 13:29:48

> > Here I'll start with first four lines
> > This cyber song could last forever
> > Written funny-happy tragicically-sad
> > Absolute nonsense or poetically clever
> >
> > I take a break to walk the pup
> > thinking of my cyber friend
> > stopping to gaze at real life
> > but know I'll return in the end
> >
> > Forsooth! Hark, hark! I've lost a tooth
> > My head is empty and witless.
> > Next time I gape, I'll pop a grape
> > Peaches ... they ain't pitless.
> >
> > I fell in love with my neighbor, the chemist --
> > So kind, so fantastically clever.
> > When I saw the ring, I thought, What an ass
> > I've been, wearing those mini-skirts in leather.
> >
> > I've found words to live my life
> > from a very sage and noble prof,
> > Don't try to clean a loaded monkey,
> > Chances are, it just might go off.
>
> boy this is tough to write
> the rythmns and not be trite
> to express my dreams and desires
> and kindle others fires

Fire, desire this throbbing ember
just don't seem to stop
I can't get no catisfaction¬meow
please don't tell my pdoc.


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