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Posted by willyeeee on January 1, 2011, at 18:31:13
Hey guys just wanted to tell you i created my own domain,yay!Its primary to let locals aware of a support group im creating,however im thinking now of also making it a resource period for all online users,please visit and check it out.
www.757moodsupport.webs.com
Also i started my own IT buisnes since im a certified tech,feel free to give input on that site as well.
And my gift to you all is i have 3 techs here if anyone needs tech support its totaly fre for my fellow babblers,just ask away,wish me luck on getting my cocktail straight im in need of it as its starting to faill more and more daily.
Posted by Maxime on January 1, 2011, at 23:06:20
In reply to My Project Please Read, posted by willyeeee on January 1, 2011, at 18:31:13
I am happy you have started a project like this.
And I certainly do not want to rain on your parade but you have quite a few grammatical problems with text. And in the heading of the site you have misspelled DEPRESSION.
If you need any help with this, please let me know.
Posted by beyondcrazy on January 2, 2011, at 20:45:08
In reply to Re: My Project Please Read » willyeeee, posted by Maxime on January 1, 2011, at 23:06:20
> I am happy you have started a project like this.
>
> And I certainly do not want to rain on your parade but you have quite a few grammatical problems with text. And in the heading of the site you have misspelled DEPRESSION.
>
> If you need any help with this, please let me know.The site looks great thank you.
BC. :)
Posted by Maxime on January 3, 2011, at 22:08:25
In reply to Re: My Project Please Read » Maxime, posted by beyondcrazy on January 2, 2011, at 20:45:08
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> The site looks great thank you.
> BC. :)
>I was only offering to clean up the text on the splash page, that's all. I am an editor and I used to designed web pages.
If you want people to come to a site AND stay, you need to follow grammar rules or else it doesn't look professional. Now the site has a washed out title on top and it cannot be read properly. It just things like that that make or break a web site.
Maxime
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